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1 Alvaro 

- title - does it make sense? 
- it isn't obvious…

- ''who has access to what''? 
- what type of security?

- changing personal data? 
- looks more like a footstep than a pencil - wouldn't think this was an editing tool 
7 - looks better - easier to see, when there are multiple entries

   - all one row looks cleaner, easier to read 

tag functionality (HOW WILL THIS WORK?) 

- do you have to have to at least one tag? or are they optional? 

8 - liked previous one more - it was cleaner, could see everything faster 
 
 

2 Tom 

- can see who’s who – looks fine 
- can sort by team, user 
- pen icon 

- easier than drilling down as before 
mock up 6 – looks like drop down box 

mock up 7 – makes it obvious that u can add multiple users coz of the shading 

mock up 8 – prefer the one before (7) 
 
 

3 Will 

cool/nice - the way that permissions are working is more granular, clearer 

- would want tool tips that said what they were first couple of times

- something that explains what rights they are/what they mean

- disclosure - is it a bit of a leading word? it could sound a bit  

- likes access management - dealing with this within launchpad - fine. within this context it makes sense 
7 - can give more than one set of access rights to a given team - its obvious in this one, wasn't in the previous one 

8 - not clear about private/security is… - would this be explained somewhere 

9 - more difficult to distinguish between the two sets - looks more like a straightforward list, less like a set of tokens, they all seem to blend in to one
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